Everlasting Dream by jrell

asuwwwwwwww, sangat lambat sekali jalan ceritanya.

Great story. Everything is well. Narrative, plot, herois, ambient. But what is very odd is close carnal relationships between own family. I feel as pervert reading this. I just hope I won't drop good story by skipping ambiguous parts.

While the story could be interesting, it feels like its AI generated. It describes everything in excruciating detail like story making AIs usually do, sees symbolism where there is none, and is overly descriptive when referring to characters.

It is just painful to read, and has so much word bloat that I would rather have an AI retell the story without the descriptions.

Any recommendations for something like this masterpiece? I love how the writer make a complicated relationship between his family.

Author thinks extra detail, and over analysis make a good book.

Absolutely mind numbing experience.

You'll very quickly start skimming through rather than reading, and quickly realise the whole chapter was a bunch of fancy descriptive sentences with no actual plot or development.

One chapter a week + a slow plot?
I really wonder if some readers have developed an extreme love of masochism?

You don't have to be a prophet to see the future of this book. Nothing concrete will happen in 500 chapters, the book itself should be stretched out to 2000 chapters, but the author will most likely abandon it before even writing 500 chapters.

Honestly, to read such books, the plot has to be VERY interesting and worth the torture of waiting a whole week for one chapter and a high probability of never seeing the end of this story.

The writing quality is really good, but this one is SLOW, absolutely glacial pacing, especially considering the author only posts a chapter once a week. And that's saying something since it's coming from me, because I enjoy slower-paced stories since they give more time to get to know the characters and immerse into the story. And it sucks because from some of the POVs we can see there's an interesting world to see out there; the author just seems to steadfastly refuse to show us any of it since the main party has settled in the middle of nowhere, and the most exciting moment is an encounter with a wolf before we get endless paragraphs about them cuddling in the middle of the night or about how it's started snowing again.

The other part is how uncomfortable the family interactions are; the characters are really young; the MC is still only a day old for over a quarter of the current chapters, and the sister is only 5, which makes it really weird when sexual stuff starts happening, like the authors weird breast milk fetish. I was expecting them to be a lot older before stuff happened. It's feels pretty creepy and uncomfortable to read an in depth description of a mother and her daughter giggling and peeing together or how she moans when her daughter is sucking on her breast.

Anyways, the story has a great skeleton; I just wish the author had a better ability to pace things well and focus on the right things and that they were significantly less creepy.

Virgin mc

Slow soo slow

Wow! This is written so well