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The Dungeon Without a System by StrangerDanger51

The unnamed main character wakes up as a Dungeon Core. Instead of being deep within the earth or in... Read more
The unnamed main character wakes up as a Dungeon Core. Instead of being deep within the earth or in a cave, this newly-minted Dungeon Core finds himself drifting to the beach of an uncharted and uninhabited island.

Watch as he explores the uses of mana, defends himself from people trying to kill him and confuses the hell out of all the humans who attempt to understand just why he's different from other dungeons.

DISCLAIMER: I have only posted my novel to Sufficient Velocity and RoyalRoad. If you see it on any other site; THAT IS NOT ME. This story is free and until I decide to publish it will remain that way. Collapse
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    Just a few chapters in and I got annoyed by what seemed like a simple, lazy story writer.

    I'm not going to say that the novel is bad since I know many people like this kind of stuff, but it most certainly isn't my cup of tea.

    When reading this kind of stuff it just makes me think of a kind of naive person without much life experiences, education or expertise in anything but weeb or gamer pursuits, and a very narrow exposure to literature as a whole.

    There's nothing wrong with a person being any of that. I just rarely ever find them or their works terribly compelling.
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      TreasureHunter
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      *Coughs. Incognito-san, this is not a review. You just wrote smack about the author. You didn't point out the faults of the book.
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        + 77 -
        'Simple, lazy writing' is a concise manner of describing a lot of traits/mistakes common to authors without much education or life experiences, which many readers are familiar with.

        Going into elaborate detail is pointless since those who don't know typically wouldn't care.

        And I mentioned that I find nothing wrong with being less educated and experienced. We all start there, and we don't all get the opportunity to significantly improve those traits.

        But that doesn't mean I'm going to coddle people's egos. Our current culture treats lower IQs like many treat obesity, like it doesn't exist and it's wrong to point out even when it's important/relevant, or as a weapon to attack with.
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    1. I got a dig bick

    2. You that read wrong

    3. You read that wrong too

    4. You checked

    5. You smiled

    7. You are wandering why you are still reading

    this

    8. You saw that mistake, right?

    (On 7)

    10. But did you see that I skipped 6?

    10. You checked

    11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped

    9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw

    13. I also skipped 2

    14. You got tricked

    15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

    kef
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      + 62 -
      I mistakenly no.1 as I got a big dick lol 😂
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        i wasnt qualified for step 2. i read enough translated novels to read that both right and wrong at the same time.

        But im curious more 9n how is this post related to the novel above?
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      Amaterazu
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      Why did people dislike this?
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        + 93 -
        They don't have dig bick thay's why...
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        ketamine.man123
        + 11 -
        Because it’s annoying and I see it in every comment section
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      TreasureHunter
      + 11 -
      This is a treasure. Lol.
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      + 00 -
      since I quite like it I’ll ”borrow” it from u like Emperor Roselle
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    + 63 -
    I've read a bunch of dungeon novel and this novel is one of the best out there but there's really nothing new to this novel, no new plots or world building, basically same story with other dungeon novel but with much better approach
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      This is slice of life isnt it?
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      + 00 -
      If you read it on royalroad.com you'll see that war is starting among the humans.
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        Bro your profile pic! lol oru2x
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    + 171 -
    After reading a lot of MTL, I had no brain cells... But now I feel reborn... It's a great read
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      + 30 -
      How does this have MTL? Isn't it an original from rr?


      Edit: nvm I misunderstood. So #CyberLife# read tons of MTL and after reading this, which I assume has good grammar, he was reborn?
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        holy f#ck
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          Lol
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        + 51 -
        Indeed, fellow daoist. Indeed
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        not all immortals are adept at comprending nirvana and rebirth i see.
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      Ramo
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      Welcome back from the tumultuous mtl sea
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        + 41 -
        how do u guys read mtl? i can barely read one paragraph then quit.
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          Only a few masters can handle mtl novels and I am one of them sigh
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            No wonder you are an immortal God. your brain processing power and imaging must be off the charts. Em.... any tips here revered immortal will be appreciated.
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              sigh even as an immortal the mtl is too strong. It’s corrosion power can corrode the mind of any being and turned them into beings with no self awareness or any hint of intelligence. But if you can survive you will gain some immunity and the corrosion will slow down the effects a little bitsigh
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                But my will is to low to persevere against this kind of corrosion of the soul. i think i might need a soul artifact or something for defense. Anyways thanks senior immortal for your enlightenment.
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                Amaterazu
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                As a matter of fact senior is still affected by the corrosion effects of comprehending the dao of mtl
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                  The dao of mtl is too complicated. It is close to reaching the level of Forbidden Dao and it about be promote to the Forbidden Dao Of Unreadable
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                  Fellow Daoist our strength comes from our lack of brain cells of the forbidden mtl dao the less brain cells the stronger we are to cultivate the mtl dao
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                  Only when we doast’s reach the true stage of brain dead we can master the Ultimate True Forbidden Dao of Uncomprehending along with True Ultimate Forbidden Dao of Unreadable
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                  Once you master these two Daos you will reach the realm of ONE ABOVE ALL
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    This is insanely good, really hoping for it not to just stop updating like many RR novels does
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      OK here I go.
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      if its not, imma kick that thing in your displaypic.
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    + 71 -
    Great book, would reccomend.
    Nice story and development, there's no overpowered mc or whatever, it's got a good pace and a unique story. (chap 43)
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    + 31 -
    Nice book so far.
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    YsL
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    Review?
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    If you see story about dungeon core, it's 90% from royalroad.
    Maybe someone can explain why they make such stories so much? Looks like strange sect...
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      I mean, it’s not very common to see successful dungeon core stories to begin with. Western audiences tend to like the idea of dungeon core stories, I don’t think they’d fit well with the culture of eastern audiences.

      A few of the more successful stories definitely attract more authors to write, leading to more successful authors, and so on and so forth.
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      + 340 -
      Royal road= dungeon core. Webnovel= system novel
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        + 40 -
        Qidian=cultivation
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