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The Great Demon System by Drip

In a world filled with abilities and superpowers, Moby Kane, a 16-year-old boy, is an orphan who is... Read more
In a world filled with abilities and superpowers, Moby Kane, a 16-year-old boy, is an orphan who is living his life with a little too much optimism, trying his best to get by.

Due to him having no ability, he had been bullied and tortured every day. However, for some odd reason, he never complained and always stayed happy no matter what. It was almost unnatural.

On one cruel day of immense pain, he realized that the world is a brutal, unforgiving place, making him regain his lost senses.

In his moment of desperation, a miracle happened.

[You have unlocked the Demon System]

Now that Moby has the power to change his cruel destiny, how will he use it to get back at the world that wronged him on the road to becoming the demon lord… Collapse
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    I really hate "system" that talks back/has a personality it overcomplicates things and author can also very easily turn him into a grandpa ring cliche , the first 10 ch were atrocious , absolutely inhuman levels of torture coming from basically kids , which I'm sure we won't see this kind of behavior for the later ch , since this was just the beginning plot device.

    Not for me. #Aimzay was right , you need to turn off your brain for this.
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      O sistema dessa historia não e um simples sistema de rpg comum, é a forma que a lorde demônio achou mais fácil do mc entender as estáticas, e como ela e um ser consciente, uma existência como qualquer outro ser vivo e obvio que ela vai ter uma personalidade, ela não e só um simples sistema de missões e etc., ela e mais como uma segunda alma no corpo do mc.
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        Sure bro , then author should've named it something else , and not a sistem based on your take of the idea , your idea is not a sistem at all , which the one in this story is.

        I'm all for unique story's , this ain't one chief , not matter what you like to think or believe , author said it's a sistem then it's a sistem.
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    Ok so a tip for those reading this: just turn off your brain and enjoy the story without thinking too much
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