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Naruto: The Wind Calamity by Devil_Hex

Naruto: The Wind Calamity
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The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the... Read more
The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the transmigration results in chakra being unlocked. Follow the story of the MC as he grows in power and stabilizes himself into the world of ninjas and trains to be the strongest.

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Warning:

1. The MC won't be op for a long time. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over years (so if u want an op mc right from the word go, this one ain't for you)

2. No harem (probably no romance either)

3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)

4. The story will start slow. Quite a few of initial chapters will be around training, orphanage and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Genin.

5. MC is a careful person, he won't put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.

6. I haven't read (nor will be reading) Baruto. So Baruto plotline won't be considered much in here.

What to expect:

1. Smart and consistent MC

2. Lots of training

3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage

4. A lot of original arcs.

5. Plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or it's characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover isn't mine and belongs to R. J

P.S. It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully I'll improve as this fanfic progresses forward. Collapse
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    MysteriousAttendant
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    • 5.0
    5.0
    Very high quality fanfic. The author describe the very dark ninja world smoothly, every chapter the plot thickens. The MC is also an old fox, very cunning and ruthless, but he isn't without moral. The plot is very reasonable and make even the MC fail sometimes, which is what I like. He has no cheat other than his very high wind affinity and space talent, but to make this OP require a lot of hardwork and grinding. In my opinion, this is even more Naruto than the real Naruto lol
    I recommend every Naruto Fans to read this!

    Overall, I give this novel a 4,8 score.
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      SilvaSteins
      + 2 ⋅ 2 -
      Would be even better if the author is not concentrating on giving him
      instead of just one or something sigh
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        MysteriousAttendant
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        It's not that bad imo. I mean, how mc supposed to fight top tier enemy like Madara and Otsutsuki without any of these jutsu lol. What I liked is the process obtaining any of this isn't instant, unlike those system based novels🗿
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    the_reader
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    • 2.8
    2.8
    I usually avoid fanfics, and this is my first time reading one, unless you count those Chinese web novels where the main character briefly visits a famous film world. I didn't have high expectations for this fanfic at first, but numerous recommendations piqued my interest. Overall, the experience was mediocre, with the exception of the initial chapters, which had some issues.

    Unfortunately, the author decided to set the main character after the conclusion of the third ninja war, after kurama attack. The narrative could have been more engaging if the protagonist had been sent during the second war or even earlier where we know anothing about. Moreover, I found it slightly frustrating that the main character appears unwilling to change the timeline or storyline, possibly out of respect for the original work or due to an inability to create a new narrative. for me Fanfics can be divided into two categories: those that stick to the original storyline while exploring unresolved plot points, and those that completely reconstruct the story using characters from the original.

    This fanfic falls into the former category, but it gave me the impression of watching filler episodes in Naruto. Another problem I had was with the jutsu: the only anime dub I watched as a kid was Doraemon, but for other anime I only watch the subbed version. As a result, my knowledge is limited to terms such as 'dotton,' 'katon,' and 'shitton.' The use of unfamiliar techniques like the 'bullet, wind, barrier etc prompted me to research jutsu independently on internet. If an author uses Japanese slang, it is preferable to stick to the Japanese versions of the jutsu. This is just a minor complaint, overall a good read if you are bored.


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      astroth eve
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      Mind recommending good fanfiction ?
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    shindayuki09
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    • 5.0
    5.0
    10/10!

    Subscribed and bookmarked!!!!
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    Listless
    + 10 ⋅ 0 -
    I say this is the no. 1 naruto fanfic
    4.5/5
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      ErectileReptile
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      I would recommend Naruto: The Outsider’s Resolve by FictionOnlyReader

      It’s similar to this novel with a non-system mc that is also an original character.
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    King 4779
    + 3 ⋅ 1 -
    This fanfic is truly good. I started it 2 days before my examination and thought it would be like all Naruto fanfic out there as I will leave after reading 50 chapters but due to this book I was not able to prepare but instead iam very happy that I found such a great book
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      Niurem
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      Broooo
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    unknown007
    + 11 ⋅ 10 -
    this fanfic tries to make a lot of sense of Naruto world which is filled with plot hole. MC has to try to be stronger himself without cheat and system which I appreciated a lot. Reading MC trying to be stronger(without interacting with characters; it is like watching him grinning in the game) is also fun at first, but after a dozen or so chapter, I am bored. It became monotonous like the nature of fanfics without exciting events(arcs). It become slice of life and I don't like slice of life novels rather watch anime.
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    Friendly Immortal
    + 11 ⋅ 2 -
    It's a good novel where MC is shameless creating trouble for everyone. About most of the story is only about his performing missions or training seals, jutsus, body, etc.

    Novel has a drawback of MC where he's not able to attach to other people till he gets benefits out of it.

    Novel has no drama of Romance or Bromance except of killing people here and there till MC becomes strongest wind user.

    Story is a little bland due to the same story line with butterfly effects but MC tries to keep out of trouble of ruining the timeline. Due to this his only female friend who was an uchiha dies during the plot while our MC is trying to loot a body and sharingans.

    Overall it's a good story and has potential but author has turned MC a aloof. 400+ chapters and story still is struggling even of MC being a S class ninja.
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    1justreads
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    The greatest thing about this novel is that the ranks actually matter. Like in any other fafic the mc is just killing elite jonin left and right and sanin are nothing but comic relief.
    Here jonins don't just die in 2 seconds they have trained their whole lives to become one of most powerful ninja and it shoes. And the way this novel maintained the air of mystery around the sannin and the power shown by jiraya really shows the level of their power, that their title is not empty and others are afraid of them for a reason.
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      captainplanet
      + 4 ⋅ 4 -
      Like in any other fafic the mc is just killing elite jonin left and right and sanin are nothing but comic relief.
      wait till ~350+ oru2x
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        PakuNaru17
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          captainplanet
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    MTL Denier
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    • 3.0
    3.0
    Pretty good, the beginning was a bit scuffed with huge blocks of text and extensive inner monologues, but the author improved so quickly that i felt nothing but amazement for his hard work: by chapter 10, you'll notice the improvement. This is one of the best naruto fan-fics out there - and although some developments are not my cup of tea(and might have even irked me), i have been enjoying this novel a whole bunch and will continue to follow as more chapters are released.
    The mc is somewhat cold and calculative, trying not to rock the boat too much while trying to become the strongest, pretty much what i would do in his situation(jk, i would probably curl up in a corner and cry my eyes out for being thrust into such a dangerous world)
    Personally, i enjoyed the training arcs the most, since you can see the mc improving and figuring out the power system step by step: of course, the majority of people might find this part to be boring, so be warned. My least favorite parts in this novel are the missions he undertakes, specifically the ones where he gains nothing from all the trouble he went through(neither loot nor interesting techniques, why bother leaving his village, it's better to just train at home pressure )
    In short, i hope the author never quits and continues to write this novel for the next 50 years. Adieu oru2x
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      MTL Denier
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      I wanted to edit this review but couldn't so i'll just leave a reply behind instead.
      I changed my mind in regards to this novel, i do believe the quality has gone down the longer you read it. Ever since the patreon advertising kicked up speed, you can noticeably see the story getting thoroughly diluted so as to make each scene last longer, therefore increasing chapter count. Nowadays, before anything happens, you have a planning phase that lasts several chapters, then you have the actual mission with some variables mixed in which basically follows what the planning phase said, and then you have the aftermath with various reactions in regards to the mc's actions during the mission, which add even more chapters...This is padding to the extreme. There's no need for a mission briefing, because rather than telling the reader what's going to happen, you could just show it, so the first phase could be completely deleted. The actual mission is the most important part and should not be skipped, however, the author also likes to drag out fights with inner monologues that bog down the action, making it less exciting, these could be removed as well. Then you have the reactions to the aftermath that although fun to read could be easily reduced from a few chapters to barely a few paragraphs.
      In short, i'm tired of reading this novel so i decided to drop it. The only thing that interested me was the tangible growth during the training arcs but we barely get that nowadays. I have dropped my rating to 3 stars out of 5. It's still a somewhat competent novel to read, but i decided to move on. It's somewhat upsetting to read my previous review filled with enthusiasm, only to slowly lose all of it to the point of giving up. Of course, you can still find enjoyment in this novel, and many people still follow this novel religiously, but i decided to move on. What a good day.
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    captainplanet
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    Has author ever mentioned how many chapters he planned for this in the official source or social media ?

    Quick thoughts after reading the initial few chapters: This is quite good if you can get past the weird "diary" style writing.
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      YeaTea
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      I have the exact same question! Would be really glad to hear the answer if you have any information
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